The Mercenary (The Men of T-FLAC, Book 1)
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Victoria Jones was a lousy liar. Not that the sensible bookkeeper was accustomed to lying—or anything else that would have disrupted her safe, dull existence. But her world took a terrifying turn when her twin brother, Alex, an agent for T-FLAC, the elite antiterrorist task force, went missing.
Now she'll do anything to find him…lie, cheat, even subject herself to the predatory advances of Alex's T-FLAC partner, Marc Savin, if it will help get her brother home safe.
But trusting the sexy, brooding operative might just be the risk of a lifetime.
The Mercenary is back, and better than ever!
Product Details
- Amazon Sales Rank: #793723 in Books
- Published on: 1994-04-01
- Original language: English
- Number of items: 1
- Binding: Paperback
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About the Author
Cherry Adair has garnered numerous awards for her innovative action-adventure novels, which include White Heat, Hot Ice, On Thin Ice, Out of Sight, In Too Deep, Hide and Seek, and Kiss and Tell, as well as her thrilling Edge trilogy: Edge of Danger, Edge of Fear, and Edge of Darkness. A favorite of reviewers and fans alike, she lives in the Pacific Northwest.
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Nervous perspiration prickled her skin.
Even though she couldn't hear breathing other than her own, her heightened sense of fear let her know she wasn't alone. Someone was watching her. Victoria Jones lay very still, eyes closed, heart pounding an uneven tattoo beneath her sore ribs.
Needing a few moments to orientate herself she tried to keep her breathing steady. A log flaring in the fireplace. There hadn't been a fire when she'd come in. But now she felt its heat and saw the dancing orange light through her eyelids.
To still her panic she counted to a hundred and twenty, then added another fifty for good measure, then slowly opened her eyes. The library was dim, but flickering firelight illuminated the lower half of the man sitting in the shadows across the room. Boots, long, jean-clad legs…the rest of him disappeared into darkness and shadow.
Heart lodged in her throat, she struggled to sit up. She'd accidentally fallen asleep, and now she was groggy and disoriented and at a distinct disadvantage.
The fact that the man wasn't saying anything intimidated her and made her feel defensive and automatically in the wrong. But she could be overreacting. Fear and exhaustion had taken up permanent residence in her body.
Her hair had come loose and floated around her shoulders and down her back as she swung her feet to the floor. Searching with her toes for her shoes, she tried with one hand to tame her hair back into its customary bun.
The man, and Tory knew he was Marc Savin even though he had yet to say a word, observed her without comment, increasing her unease. Still, her grand-mother's strict teachings came to the fore and she said in a prim, polite voice, "I'm sorry. I must have fallen asleep."
Giving up on her hair, she pushed her feet all the way into her low heels and stood, despite her shaky knees. Piercing the darkness to gauge his reaction to her un-invited presence in his home, Tory felt marginally more in control with her shoes on. The silence stretched uncomfortably. He wasn't going to make this easy for her.
Why should he? He didn't even know her. Fidgeting, she realized that it was silly actually, standing or sitting, barefoot or not, the amount of intimidation radiating from him was all consuming. Tory had no clue how to deal with such a…a…presence.
The men she normally encountered in her day-today life were academics. Intelligent, cultured and extremely…low-key. Meek. But not Savin. She was fairly sure he didn't have a meek bone in his impressive body. Which was precisely why she was there. "What happened?" he asked lazily. "Miss the exit for the Holiday Inn?"
His rough, deep voice startled her. His mockery added to her misery, and she waited for him to throw her out of his home. Not that she was going. She was a woman on a mission, she reminded herself, adding a little starch to her spine.
"I have jet lag. I didn't realize…" She tugged self-consciously at the hem of her jacket. "I didn't realize you'd be so long…." The man who'd let her in—reluctantly—had said his boss would be "right in." That had been—she glanced subtly at her watch—four hours ago.
"Did we have an appointment?"
"Um… No. We didn't. I'm Victoria Jones." She held her ground while a flush of heat betrayed her. His presence was larger than life and seemed to fill the room with a pulsing sensuality that made her extremely uncomfortable.
"And?" Marc said drily. He'd found that out by checking the driver's license in her purse. Her name meant nothing to him. When he'd bent to retrieve the tote from the floor beside her he'd gotten a lungful of a floral fragrance that had teased at his dormant libido. Ridiculous, of course. Even in the dim light, he knew this repressed-looking mouse wasn't his type at all.
The name and San Diego address on her license didn't reveal much. But what was mildly interesting was how hard she was trying to pretend she didn't have a cast on her left arm. It was barely visible beneath her sleeve, but its bulk was hard to miss.
He flipped on the light to get a better look at her. She looked like a throwback to the eighties, dressed as she was in a butt-ugly and unflattering business suit. Navy. The jacket boxy, the skirt neither tight nor loose. The hemline hitting just below the knee. Her sensible black shoes were polished and sported a modest heel. Christ, from the neck down she looked like a freaking stereotypical librarian.
Marc concentrated on her unattractive clothing, and kept his attention away from her soft mouth, and the mile of uncooperative dark hair she was trying, unsuccessfully, to cram back into a bun at her nape with one hand.
"Whatever you're selling, I don't need," he jabbed to see the spark of reaction. "Unless you're here about an overdue library fine?"
Her cheekbones flamed, but she didn't drop her gaze. Maybe not a mouse, then, he reevaluated, wondering just who in the hell she was. He'd never met her before, he was sure, but there was something vaguely familiar around the eyes….
Could her skin possibly be as soft as it appeared? It was pale, silky and looked as though it tasted like cream. Damn it, he needed to get laid. Soon.
"Snap it up, would you? I've had a bitch of a day. I'm cold, tired and hungry, and you're standing in the way of a hot shower and a meal."
"Are you Marcus Savin?"
"The one and only." He didn't bother to conceal his annoyance as he stepped from the shadows into the circle of light.
Tory blinked. In a flash she tried to take him in. Her world slowed its spin—a peculiar, terrifying feeling. Dread tightened her throat. Marc Savin wasn't anything like the man she'd envisioned.
He was about twenty years younger than she'd anticipated. And taller. Taller and broader, and disconcertingly male. His hair was thick and dark and tied back, revealing a winking diamond—a diamond!—in one ear. Good grief. His jeans were old and faded, the cream-colored fisherman's-knit sweater he wore looked soft and well-worn. The sweater was the only soft thing about him, she thought, mouth dry.
He looked like someone who'd stepped out of the pages of a magazine. What the casual yet well-dressed, brooding predatory male wore. Her eyes met his. Gray. Not the soft warm gray of a kitten or the comforting gray of a favorite blanket. His eyes were the cold, icy-pale gray of the sky just before a frost, the bleak soulless gray of bare tree branches frozen for all time. Tory shivered despite the blazing fire.
She could sense dismissal coming. Straightening her spine she stepped forward onto the thick Persian carpet between them, her hand outstretched. "Mr. Savin, I'm—"
"You've already told me who you are, Miss Jones. I just don't know what you're doing here."
For a moment her hand stayed poised in midair until she realized he had no intention of taking it. Her arm dropped to her side, and she flattened her damp palm against her thigh. Despite all the hours of rehearsal on the plane coming here, she was suddenly tongue-tied.
She knew what she must look like—an exhausted woman, with mussed dark hair and wrinkled clothes. She absently touched her face where the cushion had left an indentation on her cheek and forced herself not to fuss with her clothing. Her injured arm throbbed. But not for a moment was she going to let him see just how terrified she was. Girding herself, she tilted her chin and met his stare.
His gaze raked her body from head to toe. His eyes narrowed when he noticed the cast on her arm, and everything inside her froze as he asked grimly, "How did that happen?" She'd thought her sleeve covered the blasted thing.
"I fell." Into a wall. Unadulterated fear made her go icy cold all over. Don't think about it. Don't think about it. Do not think about it.
"Take off your jacket." He didn't move, but his words felt sinister.
She gave him a startled look while her heart pounded beneath her rib cage like a trapped animal. "What on earth for?"
"Because I say so."
"I'm a guest in your home, Mr. Savin. I won't be bullie—"
"Guest? Guests are invited. Don't make me strip it off for you. I'm too tired for games."
He was unyielding. As much as she hated obeying, Tory choked down her pride and shrugged off the jacket. It hadn't been easy getting the fiberglass into the sleeve, and it wasn't any easier getting that arm out. Bunching her jacket against her body, she held up her arm, shooting him a fulminating glare. Which might have been effective on some level if she hadn't felt her chin wobble.
She would not cry in front of him. She gritted her teeth. "Satisfied?"
"Far from it." His eyes took in the grubby cast showing beneath the edge of her white cotton sleeve, then scanned her face. It took every ounce of willpower she possessed not to touch any of the bruises she'd so carefully covered with foundation to make sure he couldn't detect them.
A muscle clenched in his jaw. "Who did this to you?"
"I told you. I fell." Often and hard. Oh, God. He was going to know she was lying through her teeth. She was lousy at it, and he seemed to be able to see directly into her brain with those pale, unamused X-ray eyes of his. Tory felt the heat in her cheeks get hotter and her gaze skittered back to the pattern on the carpet before she forced herself to meet his eyes.
"Let me put it this way, Miss Jones. I'll ask the questions. All you have to do is supply truthful answers. If I don't like what I hear, you'll be out of here so damned fast your head will spin. Got it?What happened to your arm?"
Tory licked her dry lips. "I was mugged at the airport."
"No abusive boyfriend or husband following you?" Hateful man. "I'm not married." His lips twitched. "Now why doesn't that surprise me?"
Tory tried to make her arm inconspicuous and bent to pick up her purse from the floor where it had fallen. Her mouth was dry and perspiration beaded on her skin. She was so tired of being scared. And he scared her to death. There was just…so much of him.
His hair, as dark as her own, was tied back in a short ponytail and the diamond stud flashed in one ear. His scuffed cowboy boo...
Customer Reviews
Adair's Debut Novel!
"The Mercenary" is Adair's debut novel written in 1994 and published as a Harlequin Temptation series romance.
This is the story of T-FLAC operative Marc Savin and his partner's sister Victoria Jones. T-FLAC (Terrorist Force Logistical Assault Command) is an elite government unit, a cloaked counterterrorist force beyond even the CIA.
When Victoria (Tory) realizes that her brother is being held prisoner, she enlists the help of Marc Savin to rescue him. Tory and her brother are twins and they have a special ability to communicate with each other telepathically. For this reason Marc needs Tory to help him locate his partner and he takes her along on the rescue mission.
This story held my interest because of Adair's ability to produce an exciting read when it comes to action, adventure and suspense. But the romance portion of the story was disappointing. There was no indepth character development. Other than their mission together and some background info on their past lives, I feel I didn't get to know Marc and Tory too well. Their relationship followed a stilted and dated format but you will find some steamy sex scenes in this story. Another slight problem in this story was that I found it difficult to believe the mental telepathy conversations between Tory and her brother.
I would have liked a longer, more indepth story, but even with these distractions, I feel that Ms. Adair did a good job with this short format series title. This title is currently out of print and very hard to find at used book stores. Copies are available through amazon.com auctions and zshops.
The Mercenary 2.5 stars
Let me start off with saying I love Cherry Adair. I've read most of her books and I held off on reading this book until it was republished. It was not worth the wait. This is Adair's first novel originally written 14 years ago. Most of the actions of the hero and heroine make absolutely no sense at all. Tory travels by herself to a violent, terrorist-controlled country to find her brother who is missing. She is captured and held hostage for a few weeks and is repeatedly beaten. They release her and escort her to the airport. When she arrives back in the States she calls upon Marc, who was her brother's partner, to help get him out. Marc has been retired from T-FLAC for over two years, he believes Alex dead and initially does not even believe her. At this point in the story, Tory is basically afraid of her own shadow, she is immensely afraid when Marc even so much as looks in her direction. Marc threatens Tory in an attempt to get her to leave and she faints! Is this the same woman who traveled by herself half way around the world to take on evil terrorists? Any woman experiencing what she did would walk away with major Post Traumatic Stress, but not Tory even though she is a self-proclaimed coward.
Once Marc is convinced that what Tory is telling him is the truth, he decides to go and to take Tory with him since she and Alex have a psychic connection. So at this point my question is...why is Marc the only T-FLAC agent going in the rescue Alex? I have a hard time believing T-FLAC would send only one man in to rescue one of their own, even more so when the man going in has been out of commission for over two years. Throughout the story there are several moments where you just want to scratch your head. For example,Tory has saved her virginity for 27 years only to give it to a man whom she has only known for a few days and he has been nothing but a bully to her, on top of that, she is scared of him.
There is a scene where the Tory pulls a gun on about 7 armed men, she tells them all to drop their weapons and they comply! These 7 armed dangerous terrorist are just so stunned to have a woman stand up to them that they all actually surrender. LOL
(**SPOILER** Another peeve about this book is that Tory never tells Marc that she is pregnant at the end of the novel. Sure they decide to get married and all so his knowledge about the pregnancy is a given but there is no moment in the book when he finds out. I kept reading expecting her to tell him at anytime and it never happened.)
I could go on but won't. This book is technically book 1 in the T-FLAC series but I recommend starting with Kiss and Tell instead. Actually none of the books need to be read in order, except the Edge books. All of Adair's T-FLAC books tend to have unbelievable plots but they are still fun to read, The Mercenary just takes it too far; that combined with weak character development but that can be expected in a first novel. Cherry Adair has come a long way since 1994.
Falls short compared to the rest of the series
Despite being separated most of their lives, Tory and her twin Alex have a psychic connection and she just knows that her brother is in trouble. Alex is a counterterrorist agent and has disappeared from his latest assignment. When Tory lands on the doorstep of Alex's mentor Marc Savin, she pleads for his help. Marc left T-FLAC after his lover was murdered in a botched assignment and now lives a solitary life on a ranch. He wants no part of the rescue, but relents and finds himself in Italy searching for Alex and attracted to his friend's sister.
This is Adair's first T-FLAC novel, which she revisited and expanded. Unfortunately, it still falls short of her later writings and missed the boat on plot and character development. And as usual we have a virginal heroine who succumbs to a man who treats her like dirt within days of meeting. It is just an average novel and does nothing to display Adair's talent at writing fast-paced romantic suspense. Had it been my first my Adair novel, I probably would not have read the rest of her fantastic T-FLAC series.




